Inconsistency
2
By pam minnesota
The author has good writing skills but so many inconsistencies with names, thoughts, decisions made and timelines. A lot of text devoted to repeating the same thoughts and feelings by the characters. I almost gave up on finishing about a quarter of the way through,
Before Forever
5
By sbsbrinson
Really sweet love story! Two hurt souls find each other.
Good Story
3
By Boomerphotog
This was a really good story, I thought. However, there were some glaring grammatical mistakes that I cannot believe any editing program wouldn’t have corrected. One word used isn’t even in the dictionary. So only three stars, although I did like the characters.
It was fine
3
By Yer Momz
It was cute. Some good spice. An adorable daughter to a single dad. An easy relationship that is mutually lustful. It’s cute.
Some things I really hated were that the author couldn’t decide if Melody’s ex was named Evan or Ethan and would change it up mid-paragraph. Also, the whole “walking in on a woman being sexually assaulted and then blaming her for cheating” trope is really gross.
But overall it was cute.
